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        marionreys 
           
           
         
          
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				 Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2014 8:54 am    Post subject: Critique my work please... | 
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				I am willing to be motivated and accepting constructive criticism...
 
 
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        puncho 
           
           
         
          
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				 Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 11:59 am    Post subject:  | 
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				Except for some of the black border on the bottom of the image (as I see it here) it is quite impressive work I would say but I never attempted such an image yet myself maybe others will be able to give you more constructive feedback I hope.
		
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        thehermit 
           
           
         
          
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				 Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:19 am    Post subject:  | 
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				It's neat, good pop out effect. I would say save it as a transparent png to preserve that pop out look.
		
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        Hado 
           
           
         
          
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				 Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 11:35 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				This is a really well put together image. The only thing I've noticed is the bottom border of the image doesn't match up with the background. Apart from that you did a great job.
		
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        Glitch 
           
           
         
          
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				 Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 9:46 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				I agree that it's a very good job. Making the background transparent sounds like a better idea to be instead of a gradient. Otherwise it will never match up on any website, paper, etc that you put it on, making it look like a box and possibly minimizing or destroying the 3D effect you have.
		
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        mastering-photoshop 
           
           
         
          
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				 Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2014 10:59 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Awesome, except the perspective of the photograph, also as many other have already pointed out instead of gradient - that too white to black, you could use something else.
		
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