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				 Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:27 pm    Post subject: Motorcycle Stretch | 
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				Hey everyone, I am new to the forum. I thought I would share some of my work. Let me know what you think
 
 
EDIT: Sorry I put this in the wrong section.
 
 
 
 
 
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				 Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:24 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Looks great. A little fuzzy in places but on first glance, just fine. _________________ www.splitlightdesigns.com
 
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:16 am    Post subject:  | 
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				It looks great, especially the pipe replacement. My only suggestions are:
 
 
the extended pieces look like they were outlined, then copied over and over to stretch. They need a bit of smoothing.
 
 
Also, the shadow on the ground is hard. You can soften it with a light guassian blur to taste, about 0.8, and you'll notice that the gravel distorts the rest of the natural shadowing. You can imitate this easily with the crystallize filter at a low setting of about 3.
 
 
Other than that, nice job. _________________ Jeff
 
 
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				 Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:44 am    Post subject:  | 
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				You need to do some work on the longest chrome pipe with the Clone Tool as you can see a pattern of the highlight running along the centre.  | 
			 
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				 Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 1:16 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Use your pen tool to keep your lines straight when using your clone. 
 
 
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