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Daryl
Joined: 17 Aug 2005
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Location: ireland
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rate + comment please
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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very nice. i like the lighting alot. the rain looks good too. maybe post a bigger image. looking good!
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ekosh
Joined: 01 Jun 2005
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Location: US of A
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:18 pm Post subject: |
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looks good I feel like it needs to be cropped to something like below
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cyborg
Joined: 12 Oct 2004
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Location: canada
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| Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 9:47 am Post subject: |
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id give it an 8...venoms color looks abit odd...good job though
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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Daryl
Joined: 17 Aug 2005
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| Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:56 am Post subject: |
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here it is with your suggest on it malcon
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ekosh
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| Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:27 am Post subject: |
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I dont like it with the larger letters it looks like you are trying to watermark it instead of putting your name into it, just a thought
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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| Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 1:28 pm Post subject: |
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yeh thats the right track try making the letters smaller and not so transparent. like maybe just some of the V overlapping onto the character. but you will need the text to be more solid. but yeah man. to me that will being it together more. i think you just over did it a little...you know what, you could probably almost have the text the same size as the origonal and just move it over a little. maybe make it slightly bigger.
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Daryl
Joined: 17 Aug 2005
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well on the theme of venom..i made this spiderman sig aswel
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Gallo_Pinto
Joined: 15 Jul 2005
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I think venom should be a lot more red, like spidy is in your other post. i just say so because, without the text, I'm not sure he's really quickly recognizeable.
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