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Daryl

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 11:57 am    Post subject: venom Reply with quote

rate + comment please


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malcon

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 7:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

very nice. i like the lighting alot. the rain looks good too. maybe post a bigger image. looking good!
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ekosh

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

looks good I feel like it needs to be cropped to something like below


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cyborg

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 9:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

id give it an 8...venoms color looks abit odd...good job though
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malcon

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 2:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

what if you made venom (the text) a little bigger and transparent where it sorta covered part of the creature? maybe that will bring it all together a little more
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Daryl

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

here it is with your suggest on it malcon


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I dont like it with the larger letters it looks like you are trying to watermark it instead of putting your name into it, just a thought
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malcon

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 1:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeh thats the right track try making the letters smaller and not so transparent. like maybe just some of the V overlapping onto the character. but you will need the text to be more solid. but yeah man. to me that will being it together more. i think you just over did it a little...you know what, you could probably almost have the text the same size as the origonal and just move it over a little. maybe make it slightly bigger.
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Daryl

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well on the theme of venom..i made this spiderman sig aswel


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Gallo_Pinto

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 1:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think venom should be a lot more red, like spidy is in your other post. i just say so because, without the text, I'm not sure he's really quickly recognizeable.
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