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EtD
Joined: 17 May 2013
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Location: Australia
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 Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:53 am Post subject: Desperately need feedback |
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The attached picture is for a school assignment and I really could use some feedback on it. The theme is grunge/graffiti, and I had to make some comment on a social issue.
The marks on the fingers are supposed to be burns, but I couldn't get them to stand out as much as I wanted to.
Any and all help would be greatly appreciated! How could I improve this?
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:51 am Post subject: |
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Looks good but the burns look too much like black painted finger nails.
Burns are more of a reddish brown so aim for closer to that.
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coproper
Joined: 18 Jun 2013
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| Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 11:42 am Post subject: |
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Why is the face black/shadow? I like the idea but I dont think it really communicates what youre trying to say at the moment.. And same with the burns, i thought they were finger nails first... maybe go for somehting more simple?
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