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Enchantment
Joined: 21 Oct 2015
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 Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2015 6:08 am Post subject: Poster design |
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Made this for a school work in a night, and was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism. I can point out myself that some of the text positionning is off and whatnot, this was mainly due to mandatory information being a lot less flexible than I'd wish it to be.
Other thing I've found disrupting in this realisation is the usage of some type of 3 plane perspective that's only found on the bottom corner. Wanted to exploit it more but I felt space lacked.
Thank you for your CnC. |
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Patrick
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Joined: 14 Feb 2003
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Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
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Enchantment
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I was going for some consistency seeing how distorted the text orientation is, as if the 'EXPO' headline was the source of light, but I can see why the drops on black background is less attractive... |
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I find myself wishing that the drop shadows weren't present on the text lines that are angled around the bottom black area.
