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        1check1
 
 
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 4:03 pm    Post subject: Help Me Review My Art... |   |   
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				| Hey Guys... Can You Guys Give Reviews And Comments On My Artwork... Thanks.
 
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        helcyon
 
 
 
          Joined: 02 Oct 2005Posts: 191
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 11:26 pm    Post subject: |   |   
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				| the image is pretty cool.  but try to bring out the boxers a little more.  I dont like the typography at all.  The actual font, might work, but i do not like the placement, colors, or effects on it_________________
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        1check1
 
 
 
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				|  Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 12:09 am    Post subject: |   |   
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				| Thanks For The Comments Mate.... Will Improve On My WOrk.... Thanks For That Honest Commentz |  | 
	 
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        teddc
 
 
 
          Joined: 04 Oct 2004Posts: 389
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				|  Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:09 am    Post subject: |   |   
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				| Well the typeface doesn'ts suit the subjuct matter, don't like the white outline. 
The oakleaf icons are not suited for the design
 The whole thing looks a hodge-podge of elements just thrown together hoping something will turn out okay.
 Have another go at it.
 
 ted
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        helcyon
 
 
 
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				|  Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:56 am    Post subject: |   |   
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				| not a prob.  also, i see u used the differnece clouds in the background.  try to stay away from any of the automatic stuff, unless u alter it a bunch and make it you own.  But yeah repost if u come up with something different_________________
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        1check1
 
 
 
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				|  Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 10:06 am    Post subject: |   |   
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				| Allryte.... Great Comments... Thanks Again Guys.... I'll Post Another Artwork Soon... Thanks Again.. |  | 
	 
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