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ducmp
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i can't really tell if theres too much on this print. Is it confusing to look at?
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BryanDowning
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I think it looks great. The only suggestions I have are:
Make the text pop a little more. You want that to be the focus of the print. The art in the upper left leads your eyes down there nicely, but I think if the text stood out a bit more you'd be golden.
The top right corner bugs me a bit. There's a dark brown piece in the very corner which looks like a new windy bar. I would either remove it or move it more in sight. Could be good both ways.
Keep up the good work!
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ducmp
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ahh thanks alot Oybro, finally someone with something to say and something useful he he.  Your' right about the brown piece, hadn't noticed it. I think removing it is the way  The lines from the bottom left corner leads to the bottom right corner. i kinda like the empty space in the upper right corner.
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No problem. Glad I could help! 
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nexusfire
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no its pretty nice, give your text a big fat black outline and see what that does for it, should make it look better.
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gonzo13
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Patrick
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gonzo13
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Golden ratio or the divine proportion , the golden section....
it is always the top-left part of an image. People always look at a picture starting from the top left. That's why I was suggesting putting the text there.
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