Joined: 28 Aug 2014
Location: United Kingdom
Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:10 pm Post subject:
I think it's great, my only suggestion as I first look at it, is maybe the "logo" (speak your mind) should be bigger? There's quite a lot of blank space, which I know you don't want a business card to look cluttered, but it looks a little sparse maybe, in my opinion. I think one way you could get a "warmer" feel, it to change the colour to a warmer tone maybe? and maybe change the font, or not having it in Capital Letters may be softer? although it looks pretty good as it is! I'm only critiquing because you asked me to otherwise I would say it's nice and well done
Joined: 14 Feb 2003
Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2015 5:17 pm Post subject:
Thank you for sharing this. To SC's point, I think an easy way to work this in might be to center the logo and make it bigger. You could move the "Speak Your Mind, LLC" lines down a bit and put "Services" on the same line as "Speech and Language Pathology" (really no reason for it to be on its own line).
It's debatable whether or not "Speak Your Mind, LLC" needs to be on the card at all, since it says it on the logo... to have it there kind of suggests it isn't clear that the logo is actually a logo and people might be unsure.
I would say you can probably drop "Office:" and "Email:" as well. If you have only one number, that's all people can use and people are familiar with email address formatting now.
I also agree with SC that it might be better to put the text in the back in a normal case for a sentence.
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